Stop Writing for Others, Write What You Know
60sChallenges common advice and encourages authentic songwriting, relatable to all creators.
▶ Play ClipAndrea Stolpe presents a comprehensive, free songwriting course designed for writers of all levels. The course covers essential and uncommon techniques used by industry professionals, focusing on melody, lyrics, chords, and rhythm to transform ordinary songs into extraordinary ones.
Songs become extraordinary when writers understand what resonates with them personally. Key elements to control are melody, chord progression, rhythm/groove, and lyric.
Make a playlist of 10 songs that hit you straight to the heart. Analyze them for melodic stylings, lyrical tendencies, chords, and rhythmic feel to discover patterns that express what you value.
Instead of trying to write what others will like, write what resonates with you. Use your own experiences—like humid Minnesota nights or struggling musician moments—as material.
Spend 15-20 minutes making a list of ordinary things you know (e.g., your dog waking you up). The ordinary becomes extraordinary in song because meaning resides in insignificant moments.
The only right way is the way that finishes a great song. Process is a skill that can be adapted. Changing your process (e.g., starting with chords instead of lyrics) can lead to new styles.
Lyrics get shape and color from the musical landscape. Prosody is the agreement between lyric and music. The same words set to different music change meaning and character.
A daily practice of sensory writing (taste, touch, sight, sound, smell, movement) for 5-10 minutes without judgment. Use a prompt (time, place, person) and write freely to generate raw material.
Start a song by setting the scene (e.g., Sara Bareilles' 'King of Anything' or John Mayer's 'Why Georgia'). This engages the listener in a moment, making what follows more meaningful.
Every song has a vantage point—the moment from which the story is told. Use past, present, and future time frames to move the song forward. The bridge often looks to the future.
A lens tells a concept through an image (e.g., a relationship through a tornado). Collide a concept with an object and use sensory terms from that object to describe the concept.
A recurring seed idea (title or repeated phrase) gives focus. Verses show something; the chorus tells what it means. Start a title list by collecting phrases from books or everyday life.
Point of view (first person, direct address, second person, third person) affects how the song connects with the audience. Changing pronouns can transform a song's feel and meaning.
The frequency of chord changes affects energy. Changing chords less often feels expansive; more often increases energy. Use this to contrast sections (e.g., verse vs. chorus).
The same chords played with different rhythms create completely different songs. Listen to new music weekly and play along to develop a vocabulary of feels and grooves.
It's okay to set aside some elements while working on others. For example, just pluck the root of each chord to explore chord choices, as in Bill Withers' 'Lovely Day'.
Avoid the tonic chord until the chorus to make the chorus feel like a release. Kelly Clarkson's 'Breakaway' is an example: the verse avoids the tonic, and the chorus lands on it.
Melody consists of pitch (which notes) and rhythm (how long and when). Great melodies support the message. Use contrast between sections by changing melodic themes.
The melody's long notes and rest space convey the 'slow burn' feeling. Expanding (long notes) slows down the moment; contracting (short notes) creates acceleration.
You can repeat the rhythm of a melodic motif while changing the pitches (e.g., 'Killing Me Softly'). This maintains unity while adding variety.
You have choices in how to set lyrics to melody. Break lines anywhere, use repetition, and experiment with rest space. Tom Petty's 'Free Fallin'' uses word repetition effectively.
Use two contrasting melodic motifs within a section (e.g., one dynamic, one small). This creates forward energy and distinctiveness.
Separate brainstorming (generating ideas without judgment) from editing (refining). Set time restraints, start each day with generating ideas, and allow songs to finish naturally.
The course provides a comprehensive toolkit for songwriters to improve their craft by understanding melody, harmony, lyrics, and rhythm. The key is consistent practice, self-discovery, and separating the creative process from the editing phase.
"The title accurately describes a full, free songwriting course with a PDF guide, and the transcript delivers exactly that."
What are the four key songwriting elements that can be controlled?
Melody, chord progression, rhythm/groove, and lyric.
04:23
What is 'destination writing'?
A daily practice of sensory writing (taste, touch, sight, sound, smell, movement) for several minutes without judgment.
20:56
What is prosody in songwriting?
The agreement or interaction between lyric and music; how the words and music work together.
17:29
What is a 'lens' in lyric writing?
Telling a concept through an image (e.g., a relationship through a tornado), using sensory terms from that image.
41:29
What is 'vantage point' in a song?
The moment from which the story is told; it gives the song a reason to be told right now.
34:15
What does 'saving the one' mean?
Avoiding the tonic chord until the chorus to create contrast and a sense of arrival.
86:18
What are the two elements of melody?
Pitch (which notes) and rhythm (how long and when the notes are sung).
95:24
How can you create contrast between sections using melody?
By using a new melodic theme with different pitch shapes, rhythms, or phrase lengths.
98:28
What is the effect of expanding (long notes) vs. contracting (short notes) in melody?
Expanding slows down the moment; contracting creates acceleration and energy.
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How can you use repetition in a melodic motif?
You can repeat both pitch and rhythm, or repeat only the rhythm while changing the pitches.
121:15
What is the role of the verse vs. the chorus?
Verses show something (supporting detail); the chorus tells what it means (the main point).
49:35
What is the recommended daily practice for sensory writing?
5 to 10 minutes every day using a prompt (time, place, or person) and writing without judgment.
28:17
How does changing point of view affect a song?
It changes the relationship between singer and audience, altering how the information lands.
56:03
What is the 'harmonic rhythm'?
The frequency and rhythm with which chords change.
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What is the purpose of a title list?
To collect phrases and words that have title potential, to be used later when writing songs.
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What Makes a Song Magical
Sets the foundation for the entire course by defining the goal: moving songs from ordinary to extraordinary.
01:28Write What You Know
Encourages authenticity over imitation, a core principle for developing a unique artistic voice.
06:41Destination Writing Exercise
Introduces a practical daily practice that generates raw material for lyrics and helps overcome writer's block.
20:56Vantage Point: Past, Present, Future
Provides a clear framework for structuring a song's narrative and ensuring forward momentum.
33:03Saving the One for Contrast
A simple but powerful harmonic technique to create dynamic contrast between sections.
85:45Melody Carries the Message: 'Slow Burn'
Illustrates how melodic choices (long notes, rest space) directly support the lyrical message.
109:15Separate Brainstorming from Editing
A crucial process insight that helps writers avoid self-criticism during the creative phase.
132:11[00:00] Hi, I'm Andrea Stolpe, and
[00:04] I made this course because I wanted
[00:08] of all levels could use to dip into some
[00:13] also some of the more uncommon techniques
[00:17] in the industry find really useful.
[00:19] I really wanted this course to be free
[00:24] circumstance, could benefit from the
[00:29] At the ends of the lessons are exercises
[00:35] that you have available, whether it's
[00:39] you're waiting to pick up the kids from
[00:44] really time to sink into your writing.
[00:47] I've also created a PDF guide that I
[00:51] tools are laid out through the course,
[00:55] You can find that in
[00:58] I really hope this
[01:01] If you find you're benefiting from it,
[01:06] channel and send this course to someone
[01:10] Thank you for being here and I can't
[01:14] strategies are helping you to answer
[01:18] something beautiful through song.
[01:21] Let's go.
[01:28] What makes a song magical?
[01:33] When I work with songwriters, they're
[01:36] been writing songs for a while, and
[01:41] being ordinary to extraordinary.
[01:45] These are the things that we'll
[01:48] course, and things that I know as
[01:54] greater control over our process,
[02:00] There is some language that we can use
[02:06] Well, it helps us feel strongly
[02:14] another place or it sings well.
[02:18] When it comes to melody, it's
[02:23] When it comes to rhythm
[02:27] It's danceable.
[02:29] It's got momentum.
[02:30] It's got drive.
[02:32] There are many ways to describe why a
[02:40] wow, that was a moment I enjoyed having
[02:46] I think the way in which we can
[02:49] extraordinary and our process from
[02:54] something deliberative is in knowing
[03:02] Now, when I listen to a playlist
[03:07] myself, that represents what I've
[03:12] similarities amongst that music,
[03:17] ground in terms of styles and genres.
[03:20] I know that I really appreciate
[03:26] it's really kind of where I find
[03:31] I know that I struggle to create
[03:36] the songwriting process, and I was
[03:42] And so if I start my process with
[03:48] satisfying an element of my songwriting
[03:53] I hear myself enjoying rhythmically
[03:59] intricate and detailed, but I also enjoy
[04:06] There are many, many ways to express
[04:11] But the key elements that I want
[04:15] understand who I am as a writer and
[04:21] the songwriting elements themselves.
[04:23] We can control melody, we can control
[04:29] groove, and then finally the lyric.
[04:32] And in those four elements lie many,
[04:38] I am as a writer and artist and
[04:43] What I would like for you to do to begin
[04:48] artistry is to make your own playlist of
[04:54] you along your musical listening journey.
[04:58] These are songs from other artists that
[05:04] And when you listen to these songs, I
[05:10] some of the important markers with regard
[05:18] chords, and then rhythmic feel.
[05:21] And I want you to see if you can find
[05:26] express to you what you value, what
[05:34] experience that you resonate with.
[05:36] Rather than just a song that's functional.
[05:40] Listen for a few days, take a little
[05:44] these songs, and it might be interesting
[05:50] people and get their response as far as
[05:56] In general, how do these
[05:59] Are they intricate and detailed?
[06:02] Is there a delicacy there?
[06:04] Are they empowered and bold and brazen
[06:08] or agressive, and dynamic?
[06:10] What are some of the qualities
[06:13] these songs that might give you
[06:18] When you're done with this exercise,
[06:22] more into this idea of writing what
[06:41] A familiar story for us as artists
[06:46] we keep trying to write what we think
[06:51] only to find that we're recreating
[06:56] And we keep pushing up against this door
[07:02] other side and recognizing that until
[07:07] write what resonates to us, or write
[07:13] quite actualize the vision that we have.
[07:16] So, write what we know is a wonderful
[07:22] throughout your writing process.
[07:24] Some of the things that I know: I
[07:29] old at midnight on New Year's Eve.
[07:32] I know humid Minnesota nights and
[07:38] when the sun was just going down.
[07:41] I know going out to the deli at 1 in the
[07:48] hours, and hanging out with songwriters
[07:53] the coke as far as it'll go because
[07:57] that night as struggling musicians.
[07:59] I know things that I could write about
[08:05] fitting into the scope of a song.
[08:08] As we develop as writers, it's
[08:14] about the things that you know about.
[08:16] So give yourself time to discover who
[08:23] There can be a tendency to gauge
[08:29] comparing them to other songs.
[08:32] But if we stop there and just continue
[08:38] artist might be able to sing and
[08:43] our own art to flourish as broadly as
[08:49] I believe that each of us, even though
[08:55] we must become artists because it is
[09:01] things that resonate with us and as human
[09:07] How we discover and refine our own
[09:15] We write.
[09:16] We record.
[09:18] We release the music, and
[09:22] I think this hasn't really changed,
[09:26] and maybe the modality in which
[09:31] But whether we share on a large scale,
[09:36] audiences, Maybe family and friends.
[09:38] The act of putting music out there and
[09:44] embrace it develops us as writers and
[09:51] were at the time of making that art.
[09:55] And then I think we can reflect on
[10:00] it and recognize where we might go
[10:08] and over time that act of writing,
[10:16] in the manner that we can and allowing
[10:21] Then we can begin to reform and
[10:28] and become more of who we are.
[10:31] I would like for you to do a
[10:34] just take about 15 to 20 minutes.
[10:37] I want you to grab something to write
[10:41] to make a list of things that you know.
[10:45] Now, it could be short little bullet
[10:50] onto my bed at 5am and staring me in the
[10:56] I know about the door slamming
[11:00] at 2am to use the bathroom.
[11:03] I know about there being a sink full
[11:08] gone to bed and it looks like
[11:11] Now you know a little bit about my life.
[11:13] Make a list of things that you know about
[11:19] thing is about song, the ordinary becomes
[11:27] the insignificant moments that we live.
[11:31] This is where songs reside.
[11:33] Make your list.
[11:35] Put it to the side and come
[11:52] There's no one right way to
[11:55] way that finishes a great song.
[11:58] And that can be different
[12:01] I tend to start with lyrics most
[12:06] me take the longest to finish.
[12:09] And I get a little bit anxious
[12:14] that I like and then no words.
[12:17] There are different ways to write and
[12:23] it's gelling and the song gets done and is
[12:29] Sometimes when we're in situations
[12:34] that we have to be flexible in
[12:38] If I'm writing top line, as the
[12:42] need to come up with melody and lyric
[12:45] that suits the structure of the track.
[12:48] So my process has to adapt to
[12:52] But if I'm at home on my own writing,
[12:58] I'll start strumming something and sing
[13:03] of lyric that begin the song for me.
[13:07] And I'll set those to a little bit of
[13:12] The way we start affects whether
[13:19] a skill that we can use to adapt.
[13:23] So if we typically start with melody
[13:29] we go and we add chords, sometimes
[13:34] about the chords is just not there.
[13:36] They're kind of an
[13:39] Now, consequently, if we're leading with
[13:46] we're doing that is because we feel most
[13:52] we're a strong vocalist, and that's
[13:56] sure that something is hanging together.
[13:59] I like to switch up the process
[14:03] know, when I start with lyrics,
[14:09] The lyric tends to be the
[14:13] When I start with chords and groove,
[14:19] melody in there with good rest space and
[14:24] the leading edge, Then, I can pull back
[14:30] The lyric is icing on the cake now.
[14:32] And I have just created a new style
[14:40] I gone with lyrics first as always.
[14:43] Sometimes I'll sit down and pay
[14:47] progression that I'm using.
[14:49] Because again, for me, classical
[14:55] through my head, which results in
[15:00] And so if I sit down and I just focus
[15:06] are the chords and what's the rhythm
[15:11] I can feel better about moving into
[15:16] taken the time to develop something
[15:21] So process
[15:23] can be a result of our strengths, and we
[15:28] process and change it up a little bit to
[15:35] we love and actually finishing songs.
[15:39] I would like for you to do an
[15:42] your process a little bit.
[15:45] Think about how you normally write a song.
[15:48] Now, this may change from song
[15:53] Your process might be to look at
[15:59] when it comes to writing a song.
[16:01] Do you tend to pick up your
[16:04] Do you not play an instrument and
[16:09] What comes with great ease for you?
[16:12] Now think about what's challenging
[16:17] What do you tend to do last?
[16:20] Because it's hard.
[16:22] Now, when we consistently write with the
[16:27] at sometimes, worst case, an unfinished
[16:33] So think about your process and how it
[16:38] and weaknesses, and consider how changing
[16:45] and the song that you get from it.
[17:01] Let's talk about lyric writing.
[17:04] Lyric writing can be
[17:06] And I think that where I'm going to
[17:11] will make you feel more empowered to
[17:17] are right for the music you're making.
[17:19] Lyrics get their shape and
[17:22] landscape that they're in.
[17:24] So, you can think of music like the
[17:29] The agreement, or the way
[17:33] interacts, we call that prosody.
[17:36] What do the words and
[17:39] If I take a simple phrase, like "hold
[17:44] musical landscapes, the meaning of
[17:50] character with which we're singing them
[17:52] seems to change as well.
[17:54] So let me show you what I mean.
[17:58] Let's say I start with a little
[18:03] Hold on.
[18:07] Hold on.
[18:10] Hold on.
[18:11] Hold on.
[18:13] It's got a sense of drive.
[18:16] There's a little bit of power.
[18:17] There's some edge to it.
[18:19] But let's say that I take those same
[18:23] landscape that's, uh, finger picking.
[18:27] Hold on,
[18:34] hold on
[18:38] So here there's a sense of longing, of
[18:44] or, um, kind of wanting to be lifted up.
[18:48] It's a really different
[18:51] Now an interesting thing is when we start
[18:57] product of the music that we make, if we
[19:02] where we go when we write lyric first and
[19:08] we begin to understand what our sound,
[19:14] can change and manipulate pieces of that
[19:20] go there with our musical landscape with
[19:23] those words from that musical landscape.
[19:27] Ultimately, what I think we can
[19:32] songs is the connection between
[19:36] should always create something
[19:42] So, an example of this, imagine
[19:46] Singing at last.
[19:49] At last.
[19:52] Why sing a long note there?
[19:54] Why set it that way?
[19:56] Why not?
[19:57] At last my love has come along.
[20:01] You know?
[20:02] Well, it's, it's true in both times, at
[20:07] pull, at last, she's waited a long time.
[20:13] And you can feel it with the music
[20:17] and really makes it come alive.
[20:19] So, instead of thinking
[20:24] challenging portion of songwriting that
[20:29] by, I want us to start thinking of
[20:36] more through words what the sound
[20:56] One of the best exercises for writing
[21:02] writing called destination writing.
[21:05] It goes by many names, sensory writing,
[21:10] You might even call it journaling,
[21:14] definition on just that idea of
[21:19] Destination writing is the process of
[21:27] descriptive writing in its raw form.
[21:30] So, unpracticed and non judging.
[21:33] And we do this for several minutes
[21:39] into the flow and stay in the
[21:44] Now, what is descriptive writing
[21:49] lyrics that we know and love?
[21:51] I want to share with you what
[21:55] as a lyric so we know where we're
[22:00] I've chosen Randy Newman's
[22:05] It's from the very beginning of this
[22:10] to this lyric with your ears attuned
[22:15] smell, and movement in the verbs.
[22:19] And what you'll notice is there's
[22:23] You'll see visually what
[22:27] Beat up little seagull on a marble stair.
[22:31] Tryin to find the ocean,
[22:34] Hard times in the city,
[22:38] Ain't nowhere to run to, there
[22:42] Waitin for a train, drunk
[22:45] Sleepin in the rain.
[22:46] And they hide their faces.
[22:48] And they hide their eyes.
[22:50] Cause the city's dying
[22:52] Oh Baltimore, man it's hard just to live.
[22:56] Oh Baltimore, man it's hard just to live.
[22:59] Just to live.
[23:01] Do you hear the imagery coming through
[23:06] And it goes on to contain a lot more.
[23:09] Now this is characteristic
[23:13] He gives us imagery to enable
[23:19] It's like a keyhole looking
[23:23] Regular practice.
[23:25] Writing with sensory language in
[23:30] attuned to the language, the
[23:35] available to us when we write lyrics.
[23:38] Now, not all songs need sensory language.
[23:44] The Weeknd has a wonderful song
[23:48] song has no sensory language,
[23:52] I'm finding ways to articulate
[23:56] I just can't say I don't
[23:59] Yeah.
[24:00] It's hard for me to communicate
[24:03] tonight I'm going to let you know.
[24:05] Let me tell the truth, baby.
[24:07] Let me tell the truth.
[24:08] Yeah.
[24:09] Now, I don't know about you, but
[24:15] little red flag, cheese flag goes
[24:21] how do I know if this is good?
[24:23] And I start to ask kind of
[24:26] What is good lyric?
[24:28] What is lyric?
[24:29] So I want you to remember that
[24:37] based on how well the lyric and
[24:42] So our goal is to figure out for
[24:50] what that balance of sensory language
[24:56] engage our listener with the musical
[25:01] Let me give you a verbal example of
[25:05] And this is just going to be me
[25:10] Fireworks with my brother back in 1984.
[25:14] Alright, here I go.
[25:17] We're in the cul de sac.
[25:19] I'm still skinny.
[25:20] Skinny like nine year olds can be,
[25:26] My brother and his friends, he's
[25:30] dancing around a carbon snake, they've
[25:37] the asphalt in the July 4 heat.
[25:39] And it's 7 p.
[25:40] m., but it's still gonna
[25:43] And the poplar trees and the cotton
[25:46] And I see my dad with his socks
[25:53] shorts on and his knobbly knees.
[25:56] And now looking back, it makes me smile.
[25:59] And my mom.
[26:00] Standing there in her gardening
[26:03] knees and the sweatpants.
[26:05] And the hat, the sun hat
[26:09] Uh, sunscreen, obsessed with not getting
[26:14] And I watch the bursts of light and the
[26:20] grimy hands and snot dribbling noses.
[26:23] And I think about this time
[26:28] And the way that the fireworks crackle
[26:33] dog, mutt, runt, barking at the hot
[26:38] heat as it rises, this colorful balloon
[26:45] these times will never be back again.
[26:48] Okay, so, This is this process of
[26:55] And when you find that you might be
[27:00] mind going blank, you can gently
[27:06] and just continue where you left off.
[27:08] Having a non judging spirit
[27:14] of the songwriting process.
[27:15] And non judgment is not the
[27:20] I'm just gently nudging myself
[27:25] me, to what resonates with me.
[27:27] Whenever a new image pops in, I just
[27:32] and let it take me to a new image.
[27:36] This process, the more you do it, The
[27:42] uncovered, uh, ideas and expressed them.
[27:46] And at this point, it's very natural
[27:50] So it's not about writing the song.
[27:53] This is about a daily practice.
[27:55] And also, then later on, we'll uncover
[28:02] seep from, from us and our history
[28:06] are, and turn them into things that
[28:11] But for now, take this
[28:17] I want you to start a daily practice
[28:20] take five to 10 minutes every day
[28:25] Again, if you'd rather use your phone
[28:29] it on your laptop typing or freeform
[28:34] Whatever way you do it.
[28:35] Choose a prompt.
[28:36] It could be a time like January 1st, 1992.
[28:41] It could be a place like sitting in
[28:46] or it could be a person like your
[28:50] Anything that inspires
[28:54] Now, here's the thing.
[28:56] Observe your tendency to want
[29:02] reserve the editing for later.
[29:05] Also, don't use any form of
[29:09] Just assess when you feel like you're
[29:13] touch, sight, sound, smell movement,
[29:19] And then when you feel like you've
[29:23] expressed maybe a small paragraph to
[29:28] close it down and put it away.
[29:30] And don't look at it again, do another
[29:34] And over time, you'll find
[29:38] comfortable with the process.
[29:40] And then we can start to look at a little
[29:46] for songs, sometimes in their stories
[29:51] use, um, to actually make music from.
[29:56] But for right now.
[29:57] All they are is our entryway
[30:01] is around us all the time.
[30:15] One of the most challenging things
[30:19] times have a story we want to tell.
[30:22] And it's hard to understand what
[30:26] need to be in the song to tell the
[30:31] feel as strongly about it as we do.
[30:35] I want to share with you a few templates
[30:41] belongs in my song and what doesn't.
[30:43] One of the simplest ways of approaching
[30:52] And this occurs in different
[30:56] film, or whether it's books.
[30:59] We first see the characters in
[31:04] to understand what it all means.
[31:08] As an example of this, is a Sara
[31:13] So here's how this goes.
[31:15] Keep drinking coffee, stare me down
[31:20] So many things I'd say if only I
[31:24] and count the cars that pass by.
[31:28] Do you see the scene?
[31:29] It's so vivid and so clear.
[31:33] John Mayer has a song called "Why
[31:39] I am driving up 85 in the kind of
[31:44] just stuck inside the gloom.
[31:46] Four more exits to my apartment,
[31:51] in drive and leave it all behind.
[31:54] So again, wonderful scene
[31:58] Okay, I want you to take a few
[32:04] I would like for you to go to some
[32:08] done and I want you to look for
[32:15] A scene in which your character is living
[32:22] And I want you to make a mental
[32:27] Sarah Bareilles scene, just like
[32:32] It's something in which you are engaging
[32:37] So that what you say in your song after
[32:43] more significant and meaningful.
[32:47] When you're done, come back to me and
[33:03] Setting the scene is a
[33:06] Many, many songs do this.
[33:08] When you set the scene, our
[33:13] Right there in that situation.
[33:16] When we go to tell a story, we
[33:22] happened, then this happened, then
[33:25] And we lose a sense of the
[33:29] while we're singing the song.
[33:32] Some songs do tell you what
[33:37] "Cats in the Cradle", "The Gambler",
[33:43] but real life doesn't go from here's this
[33:49] how I overcame it and here's how I feel
[33:53] The length of a song.
[33:56] So what we tend to do is we root
[34:00] tell what's going on right now.
[34:03] And we tell what happened to get
[34:07] think the future will be like.
[34:10] And from these time frames,
[34:15] This I call vantage point.
[34:18] Every song has a vantage point.
[34:21] It's the moment from which
[34:26] And it's the moment that gives
[34:29] right now, as opposed to later
[34:37] Let's say I'm writing a song
[34:42] Maybe I'm feeling nervous about moving
[34:49] phase, and I don't know what to expect.
[34:52] That challenge is the height of the
[34:58] so it deserves to be the first verse.
[35:02] When I'm expressing this challenge, if
[35:08] of this, ah, it's really hard and
[35:11] worried and I hope it's going to be okay.
[35:14] If I continue to tell you about this
[35:19] I am, the song doesn't move forward.
[35:22] And so the purpose of looking at past,
[35:28] the vantage point is to really begin
[35:32] story I want to tell and make sure
[35:38] Pharrell Williams has a
[35:40] And he begins the song by putting
[35:45] And listen to the sensory language here.
[35:48] Now he starts with a non sensory
[35:51] want to listen for the next line.
[35:53] It might seem crazy what I'm about to say.
[35:57] Sunshine, she's here.
[35:58] You can take a break.
[36:00] See that sunshine?
[36:01] It already makes me feel
[36:05] I'm a hot air balloon that could
[36:09] I don't care, baby, by the way.
[36:11] More imagery that just uplifts.
[36:14] Now, the whole first verse is
[36:20] the main message of the chorus.
[36:21] So by the time he gets
[36:23] He says, cause I'm happy.
[36:26] Clap along if you feel
[36:29] Great imagery right there.
[36:31] And I'm happy.
[36:32] Clap along if you feel like
[36:34] That line just tells.
[36:37] Uh, I'm happy.
[36:38] Clap along if you know
[36:41] I'm happy.
[36:42] Clap along if you feel like
[36:45] So the chorus just tells
[36:49] Now, the second verse of this
[36:53] happy and flips it over.
[36:56] Because imagine for a minute, if
[37:01] of what happiness feels and looks
[37:05] for you, I'm glad you're so happy.
[37:07] But what about me?
[37:07] You know, what about this other side?
[37:10] And so he says, alright I'll look at that.
[37:13] Here's how the second verse starts: Well
[37:18] Right?
[37:19] Well, give me all you got don't hold
[37:25] a song capturing the whole picture.
[37:28] So at any point in a song that
[37:35] solution and the problem, or it's
[37:41] look at the now or before the now.
[37:44] All right, in my example of the challenge
[37:48] life, I could look back and say, you know
[37:54] This phase used to fit me.
[37:56] New York streets and the busyness
[38:00] and the buildings and the, and the
[38:05] And after a while, I felt myself become
[38:12] I felt myself.
[38:13] overwhelmed, maybe my
[38:16] And now here I am thinking
[38:20] So I've given you a backstory and
[38:25] with how it used to feel invigorating.
[38:29] So whenever you're looking at the
[38:33] tell, see if you can push the content
[38:42] Or problem.
[38:44] Time frame of here's how it is
[38:49] Sometimes these extremes they help
[38:53] song forward through its sections
[38:59] information the listener needs to really
[39:04] that the character is going through.
[39:06] The final timeframe of future is often
[39:11] talk more about later, but the bridge
[39:17] Kelly Clarkson has a wonderful song that
[39:22] And in her bridge, buildings
[39:26] swinging with revolving doors.
[39:28] I don't really know where
[39:31] moving on, moving on, moving on.
[39:33] So she shows us an example of an
[39:40] the risk, she's gonna keep going.
[39:44] And that is futuristic thinking and a
[39:50] So I would like you to try
[39:54] I want you to think of a concept that
[40:01] And it could be a title, or it could
[40:05] about being in a place now in life
[40:10] And I feel excited but also
[40:15] And I want you to map out the
[40:20] Is my singer experiencing a challenge?
[40:24] Or is my singer experiencing delight,
[40:31] Or peace, calm?
[40:32] What's the now?
[40:34] Now, taking that, what would be the past?
[40:38] What led up to this moment?
[40:40] Or what is the considering the flip
[40:47] And then one last look into the future.
[40:50] What could be the future
[40:56] Map out this different parts
[41:00] Don't take too long, maybe 10 minutes,
[41:06] view of your song in an outline of
[41:11] writing a real lyric and music to it.
[41:16] Have fun.
[41:29] So, I've talked about setting the
[41:34] a song establish the point in time
[41:39] And then we've also talked about vantage
[41:45] what parts of the story to deliver in
[41:50] present and future.
[41:52] There's another style of lyric
[41:57] how to express what we want to
[42:02] A lens is when we tell a
[42:08] So for example, I can talk about a
[42:14] tornado, and that relationship carries
[42:19] elements of a tornado, like it's spinning
[42:26] and it whips up, uh, the earth and
[42:31] with it and sets it down somewhere else.
[42:35] Now, I can change that concept
[42:38] be characterized by those things.
[42:40] Let's say divorce.
[42:43] I could talk about a parent's divorce
[42:48] Using a lens is a wonderful way to allow
[42:57] that doesn't require that we put the
[43:03] Now, let me show you how a lens
[43:11] This is the song, "Who Are You Mad At?"
[43:14] by, uh, Jordan Schellhardt.
[43:17] You come through the door
[43:20] walls and window panes.
[43:22] Blow off the roof and let it rain on me.
[43:26] Then you get silent right after the storm
[43:31] I said I'm sorry, but
[43:36] Do you hear the words that
[43:41] And they even say the word
[43:45] That's the lens.
[43:47] A lot of times when we're
[43:51] in our lyrics, but we miss it.
[43:54] When we describe things like her hair
[43:59] fact, giving the listener an image, and
[44:05] could just let that image go when we
[44:10] is allowing ourselves the ability to
[44:16] and then liken those sensory terms
[44:22] So we're colliding a concept with
[44:28] Look for this idea, this lens in other
[44:36] soon find that verbs like rattling windows
[44:41] come out over and over again.
[44:43] These verbs, these descriptors of taste,
[44:48] they come from the lens and then you
[44:53] the concept you're really talking about.
[44:55] It's a beautiful way to envision a more
[45:02] might be more appealing to you if you
[45:09] in your lyrics.
[45:09] Here's an exercise for you with Lens.
[45:12] I would like for you to
[45:15] Let's say 10 nouns that
[45:19] And then, look at a song concept that
[45:25] And I want you to hold that song concept
[45:31] So, you're going to imagine Popcorn.
[45:34] That's my noun.
[45:35] Let me look at, uh, a relationship
[45:39] through the lens of popcorn.
[45:42] That relationship is unpredictable.
[45:45] It's fun.
[45:46] It's greasy.
[45:47] It's salty.
[45:48] It's something that is a
[45:52] Maybe it's under pressure.
[45:53] Maybe there's points of steam,
[45:57] But all in all, it's, I
[46:01] Popcorn.
[46:02] Now, if I change the lens and I go
[46:08] I'm going to get ten different songs.
[46:11] But ultimately, the practice here is
[46:17] different lenses for a single song
[46:22] your favorite and write that song.
[46:37] Whatever kind of music
[46:41] Having a seed idea in a song that recurs
[46:48] a familiar thought of words, or words
[46:54] progression, this is what allows us to
[47:01] to our audience and for that to be
[47:08] When it comes to lyric writing, the
[47:13] understand where they are in the song
[47:17] to tell often comes down to a title.
[47:22] Now, whether it is the actual title
[47:26] simply repeated often is up to us.
[47:29] Of course, some songs don't carry
[47:35] title of the song, but I'm going to
[47:39] important to have focus in a song.
[47:42] And the way that we can do that is
[47:46] back and be positioned in areas
[47:52] Some songs have the title right
[47:58] An example of this might be Bill
[48:03] Ain't no sunshine when she's gone.
[48:06] It's not warm when she's away.
[48:09] Ain't no sunshine when she's
[48:13] long, anytime she goes away.
[48:17] Wonder this time where she's gone, wonder
[48:22] when she's gone, and this house just
[48:30] Another example would be
[48:33] Blackbird singing in the dead of night,
[48:38] All your life.
[48:40] You were only waiting
[48:44] Blackbirds singing in the dead of night.
[48:46] Take these sunken eyes and learn to see.
[48:49] All your life, you were only
[48:55] Our tendency is to write every
[48:58] We want to say it all.
[49:00] But the most magical song experiences
[49:05] people reflecting back to me over and over
[49:11] point clearly, concisely, beautifully.
[49:16] That's our job, just one.
[49:18] And a verse, the job of the verse
[49:23] detail that makes me believe that one
[49:30] there's nothing else I need to say
[49:35] Verses often show us something.
[49:38] The chorus tells us what it means.
[49:42] Catching a clean,
[49:47] Here are some titles that artists have had
[49:53] just for a minute what might be qualities
[49:59] Here's a title.
[50:01] It's "Cool".
[50:03] Just the word cool.
[50:05] "Fake Out".
[50:07] "Death Wish".
[50:09] That's interesting.
[50:10] "Speak to Me".
[50:11] Depeche Mode.
[50:13] Sometimes a title is just
[50:20] Now, other times a title
[50:23] "Superpowers" by Daniel Caesar.
[50:26] "Back 40 Back", Luke Combs, right?
[50:29] What is back 40 back, man?
[50:30] That's kind of interesting.
[50:31] Sometimes you will find that your
[50:37] with the way that it flows or doesn't flow
[50:44] And this is a beautiful thing because
[50:49] language that the music is creating for
[50:54] our skin and become art instead of just
[51:01] So.
[51:02] I would love for you to take a
[51:07] call a title list for yourself.
[51:11] Take a notebook or make yourself a digital
[51:18] You could do this by setting
[51:24] saying, today for these 20 minutes
[51:29] You could go to some books that you
[51:35] random page, scroll down for phrases,
[51:42] to you that has title potential.
[51:46] You don't have to know, you
[51:51] a title might be telling you.
[51:54] Jot the title down.
[51:56] and set it aside for a later date.
[51:59] But start your title list so that when
[52:07] can go back to that list and consider
[52:26] There's one more element of lyric
[52:30] with you that affects how we
[52:37] When we write, we naturally take on
[52:42] And the point of view
[52:46] So, when I use first person point
[52:51] I am speaking to you,
[52:57] When I use direct address, I am
[53:03] You and me.
[53:05] When I'm using second person narrative,
[53:11] you feel this and that happens and
[53:14] And so I, as the singer and delivering to
[53:23] I'm slightly outside this experience.
[53:25] I'm just relaying the information.
[53:28] When I'm addressing the third
[53:34] and they do this, think this, and
[53:40] I'm the narrator, and I'm
[53:43] say what I want to say here.
[53:45] And none of it is necessarily how I am.
[53:49] I am just reporting the news.
[53:52] So, how is point of view really useful
[54:00] I going to use it to create the kind
[54:04] Well, I think one of the first things
[54:10] notice the point of view that we're using.
[54:13] When we notice the point of view,
[54:17] experiment with how changing those
[54:22] Let me give you an example.
[54:24] Here's a song called "Never
[54:27] It's a John Mayer song
[54:30] Now it's never on the day you leave that
[54:35] you can't remember why you said goodbye.
[54:38] You'll hear an old familiar sound and
[54:43] but never, never on the day you leave.
[54:48] So, I understand, from this point
[54:55] truth that might be my truth too.
[55:01] And she is gone, and so naturally,
[55:07] works really well to further
[55:12] They've left.
[55:13] It's over.
[55:14] Now let me try changing the pronouns
[55:20] you perceive me as the singer, and the
[55:26] No, it's never on the day I leave
[55:32] And I can't remember why we said goodbye.
[55:35] And I'll hear an old familiar sound
[55:40] but never, never on the day I leave.
[55:44] So now, interestingly, I think
[55:51] Perhaps in a manner that doesn't
[55:56] just one person's experience.
[55:59] And it might even be a
[56:03] When we change the point of view,
[56:09] between the singer and the audience.
[56:12] We're changing the way
[56:16] And so, as a writer, even if I can't
[56:21] the pronouns is going to have, it's
[56:26] that gives me the ability to step
[56:30] is telling me that it could be saying.
[56:33] Right?
[56:34] So it's a wonderful tool to be aware of
[56:40] it so that I can find the soul of the
[56:47] life with a particular point of view.
[56:50] Sometimes not having pronouns
[56:54] that we want in the lyric.
[56:56] Going back to Randy Newman's
[57:00] for the lack of pronouns.
[57:02] Beat up little seagull on a marble stair.
[57:05] Tryin to find the ocean,
[57:09] Hard times in the city,
[57:12] Ain't nowhere to run, there
[57:16] Waitin for a train, drunk
[57:19] Sleepin in the rain, and they hide their
[57:26] the city's dyin and they don't know why.
[57:30] For the first time.
[57:32] Late in the song we hear the word they.
[57:35] They is quite distancing.
[57:37] I don't know who they is and I
[57:41] It's just a group.
[57:42] That I don't belong to, and
[57:46] And so the lack of pronoun there,
[57:52] helps to emphasize the desolation
[57:59] that he's describing, the tough times.
[58:02] So, consider your pronouns.
[58:04] And know that you have control over
[58:09] them and which pronouns you use to create
[58:16] So a great exercise can be to find a
[58:20] it out, and just exchange the point
[58:26] Go from first person to third
[58:30] first person, or to direct address.
[58:33] Haphazardly, without being able to see the
[58:39] back and observe what the change causes.
[58:42] Now sometimes you might realize,
[58:45] new point of view confirms that my
[58:50] But sometimes, changing point of view
[58:54] a song, where what once felt cheesy
[59:01] real, and sometimes the point of
[59:06] I know how to finish this song.
[59:09] So I would encourage you to find a song,
[59:13] be stuck or stalled or something that
[59:18] Flip the point of view and
[59:20] new insight into the song.
[59:43] A foundational piece of our
[59:47] doing on the instrument.
[59:49] And I don't know about you, but when I
[59:55] feel with which I'm going to play those
[1:00:01] And the reason is, I think it's
[1:00:05] from the typical places we go.
[1:00:09] I know what I've been doing
[1:00:14] on piano, with my chords.
[1:00:16] And so sometimes it feels
[1:00:20] Nothing really interesting that
[1:00:25] I approach songwriting can then
[1:00:32] If I don't spend some time giving
[1:00:39] And so what I'm really talking
[1:00:42] harmonic rhythm of the feel with
[1:00:48] I think most of us are looking
[1:00:54] when we go to our instrument.
[1:00:57] And, uh, certainly, we can wind up
[1:01:14] some really interesting bass movements,
[1:01:21] chord, you know, a flat three, um, and
[1:01:29] I go now that's an interesting color?
[1:01:32] But, only doing that leaves behind
[1:01:40] is accessible to us without really even
[1:01:47] the instrument with music theory.
[1:01:50] And that is paying attention to time, time
[1:02:00] I'd like to use a Sheryl Crow song called
[1:02:06] Now, when I play, I'm going to be
[1:02:12] we've been playing guitar a while.
[1:02:14] I'm playing an A major, a D major,
[1:02:24] So it's in the key of A.
[1:02:26] And in this song, what's
[1:02:32] transition from one to another.
[1:02:35] If I were given those chords,
[1:02:42] 3 4 1 2 3 4 1 2 3 4.
[1:02:49] You know what I'm saying?
[1:02:51] One chord per measure and then I'd
[1:02:56] to write the melody and the lyric.
[1:02:58] And so here's what Sheryl
[1:03:03] And it has a wonderful movement
[1:03:10] prosody or dance with the melody.
[1:03:14] God I
[1:03:18] feel like
[1:03:19] hell tonight.
[1:03:22] Tears of rage I cannot lie Be the
[1:03:32] you strong enough to be my man
[1:03:46] So, the movement here happens
[1:03:51] God I feel like hell tonight.
[1:03:57] And I think, wow, what if I had
[1:04:05] to change chords every bar?
[1:04:08] Or, in the middle of every
[1:04:12] So it has such a beautiful lilt to it.
[1:04:16] This idea of when we change chords
[1:04:20] is really wonderful because then we can
[1:04:27] So, for example, if I have a
[1:04:31] know the verse goes like this,
[1:04:36] one two three four five six one.
[1:04:38] I'm going to use two notes.
[1:04:39] Two chords,
[1:04:57] so each chord lasts two measures.
[1:05:16] Now look when I change
[1:05:27] now, that clearly was a new section.
[1:05:30] And did you feel the energy pick up?
[1:05:33] It's a result of two things going to a new
[1:05:45] Not much changed in the
[1:05:48] It's all due to doing
[1:05:53] And again, these aren't chords that
[1:05:58] too long, so it's really about the
[1:06:04] The more frequently I change, the
[1:06:10] The less frequently, the more
[1:06:15] sprawling it begins to feel.
[1:06:17] And that could feel peaceful and content.
[1:06:21] Or maybe it feels a little bit, um,
[1:06:27] Maybe it feels a little
[1:06:32] Ba da da, da da, ba ba ba ba ba
[1:06:56] So here I'm staying on one
[1:07:01] And that might create kind of a
[1:07:06] tension going to relieve, you know?
[1:07:08] So, when we change chords is a really
[1:07:14] apply anytime because you simply
[1:07:20] A really great exercise to take
[1:07:25] would be to just take 10 minutes
[1:07:30] around with changing the frequency
[1:07:34] So let's say that I've got A major
[1:07:41] around with real basic 1, 2, 3,
[1:07:50] Now I can change chords elsewhere.
[1:07:52] 4 1 2 3 4 1 2,
[1:08:01] Or I could stretch it out.
[1:08:02] 1 2 3 4 3 4 1 2 3,
[1:08:11] 4.
[1:08:11] Right?
[1:08:12] And so not having assumptions about
[1:08:18] up a lot of possibilities for how
[1:08:22] So take 10 minutes and just play around
[1:08:27] about when you should change chords and
[1:08:32] bit and you'll find that you come up
[1:08:36] feels just from that simple exercise.
[1:08:57] Nobody doesn't know that song.
[1:09:01] And it's really interesting
[1:09:05] And yet, it's the rhythm with which
[1:09:10] makes me realize it's that song.
[1:09:12] Right?
[1:09:12] If I change that and I go
[1:09:20] Now it's not that song anymore.
[1:09:22] Same chords.
[1:09:23] So, the rhythm, or the feel, the harmonic
[1:09:29] really affects the identity that the
[1:09:35] helps to establish who the character is.
[1:09:38] Now, remember this idea
[1:09:42] You can choose all the chords you
[1:09:46] correctly express the character with
[1:09:51] the full scope of that character, right?
[1:09:54] So guitarists learn this by playing
[1:10:00] develop that right hand flexibility,
[1:10:05] that we get to develop a vocabulary of
[1:10:13] us to write different styles of songs.
[1:10:17] Now, we could go with
[1:10:26] And just because of this feeling
[1:10:30] has more of a rock groove to it.
[1:10:33] If I finger pick, Um, I took
[1:10:40] Suddenly, I get a little
[1:10:44] I climbed a mountain, I turned
[1:10:51] sense of looking back and reflection.
[1:10:54] It's just wonderful, but it's that
[1:11:00] that takes me to that place lyrically.
[1:11:04] So, if you feel that you're writing a lot
[1:11:10] that is kind of a point of stuckness to
[1:11:16] absolutely, first of all, listen, listen,
[1:11:22] outside of the music that you typically
[1:11:28] is some new influences on our right hand.
[1:11:32] If you're strumming with your right hand,
[1:11:38] take us to new places with our content.
[1:11:42] So how much should we listen?
[1:11:45] I recommend that you listen to at
[1:11:50] If you can, more is always great.
[1:11:53] But to take that a step further, pick a
[1:11:59] And play along with it.
[1:12:01] Now it could be that you have to
[1:12:04] mess and you're not even able to
[1:12:08] And you bring out your capo
[1:12:11] It's okay.
[1:12:12] Just try to let your right hand
[1:12:18] And then,
[1:12:19] you might even record yourself laying
[1:12:24] And then later you can pull it out
[1:12:29] And we don't even really need
[1:12:32] We can simply strum, get the feel
[1:12:38] something inspired by that feel.
[1:12:41] So I would recommend doing that.
[1:12:43] Once a week, if you've got the
[1:12:47] month, and it'll help you to develop
[1:12:53] write new songs and inspire you.
[1:12:55] A really great exercise that you can do
[1:13:01] and pay attention to the feels and the
[1:13:07] And when you're listening to something
[1:13:14] take that groove and start to sing some
[1:13:19] your title list over that mood and groove.
[1:13:23] The idea here is not that you need
[1:13:28] original moods and harmonic rhythms
[1:13:31] every time you sit down to write,
[1:13:35] other people are doing within a
[1:13:40] And just experiment with how the things
[1:13:45] ideas feel over those grooves and rhythms.
[1:13:50] And this can then unlock a whole new
[1:13:56] just using other artists to inspire us
[1:14:01] Try this out for a few minutes every
[1:14:07] the titles that you have connecting to
[1:14:25] Sometimes it's intimidating to manage
[1:14:32] chords and feel all at the same time.
[1:14:35] So I want to tell you that it's okay and
[1:14:41] those areas aside while you work on one.
[1:14:46] Sometimes, uh, folks who don't
[1:14:50] Oh, I hear it in my head.
[1:14:52] I know what I want to hear, but I
[1:14:57] And I'll admit it was sometimes
[1:15:01] instrument, I will search around to
[1:15:06] And of course I, I know all the normal
[1:15:11] we want to go by accident and sometimes
[1:15:15] and we'll know it when we hear it.
[1:15:16] So there's nothing wrong with
[1:15:19] just going to look around a bit.
[1:15:22] But one of the best ways I think
[1:15:26] is to say, you know what, I've got
[1:15:29] to all be playing at the same time.
[1:15:30] I'm just gonna, gonna do one.
[1:15:33] I'm gonna capture a note in
[1:15:36] gonna be the root of the chord.
[1:15:39] And I'm gonna use this song,
[1:15:43] Amazing song.
[1:15:45] And I'm going to just pluck the
[1:15:51] And I want to look at why did he
[1:15:55] And what is so great about
[1:16:02] Why those?
[1:16:04] Because under a melody, we
[1:16:07] chords to capture the emotion.
[1:16:09] So, the first line of the song is, When
[1:16:14] goes, When I wake up in the morning, love.
[1:16:20] So it starts on the root of the scale.
[1:16:24] And it's in the key of E.
[1:16:26] So it's, When I wake up
[1:16:33] And sunlight hurts my eyes.
[1:16:36] And something without warning, love.
[1:16:44] Bears heavy
[1:16:48] on my mind
[1:16:50] So the idea here is that he plays
[1:16:58] First, the key, the the, the, the E.
[1:17:01] Now, why start on the e?
[1:17:04] When he plays, when I wake up in,
[1:17:10] beautifully with the key.
[1:17:12] When I wake up and when I wake,
[1:17:17] It's very agreeable.
[1:17:18] And so I think that sets
[1:17:22] It's almost like he's saying,
[1:17:26] morning, love, it's not awful.
[1:17:30] Like it's not, um, I'm drowning
[1:17:34] It's all right.
[1:17:36] It's all right.
[1:17:37] You know, take this with a
[1:17:41] When I wake up in the morning, love.
[1:17:44] Right?
[1:17:45] There's a little bit of challenge.
[1:17:48] That morning, sometimes like, uh,
[1:17:53] That's what this C
[1:17:55] It's a little dark, right?
[1:17:56] A little darker.
[1:17:57] It's darker than this.
[1:17:59] This says, um.
[1:18:01] Little pain, little, little twinge.
[1:18:04] And then he goes, the
[1:18:11] That's a little bit painful, right?
[1:18:14] Just a little, it's not a, I'm
[1:18:18] it's just a little, little jab.
[1:18:21] So what I'm saying here is that the
[1:18:28] And when you write a lot of songs.
[1:18:30] Or, you know, Bill Withers, uh,
[1:18:35] didn't release a lot of albums.
[1:18:38] And yet, um, many of his songs
[1:18:44] There's such intentionality in how the
[1:18:53] Now, the song goes on to say, and
[1:19:02] It bears heavy on my mind.
[1:19:06] It's not bears heavy on my mind
[1:19:13] Right?
[1:19:14] If he goes back to that C sharp minor,
[1:19:22] uh, to me there's a little strength there.
[1:19:25] It's a little like, yeah,
[1:19:27] Stay tuned and we'll see what comes next.
[1:19:29] Kind of a feeling.
[1:19:30] And then there's a little pre chorus
[1:19:35] you and the world's all right with me.
[1:19:43] You know, it's like,
[1:19:45] Just one look at you.
[1:19:49] And so the feeling here, you can
[1:19:55] And then he goes up, he lets the
[1:20:01] there as far as I'm looking at it.
[1:20:03] Skeletally.
[1:20:04] Uh, then I look at you and
[1:20:12] How do you say It's all right with
[1:20:16] An E minor.
[1:20:19] It's so interesting.
[1:20:21] So the colors of the chords, I'm gonna
[1:20:26] that they cast over the words will be
[1:20:33] you have to attune to, what do I feel
[1:20:37] the message to be now that I
[1:20:42] And it's a beautiful, um, dance
[1:20:49] shares with us what it's meaning.
[1:20:53] Then, we get to this chorus.
[1:20:56] Uh, I know it's gonna be Then,
[1:21:09] So it really is a lovely day
[1:21:14] We're over the E major again, the world
[1:21:23] that we've had in this pre chorus,
[1:21:29] so that when we come back, it feels
[1:21:36] It's a beautiful, beautiful,
[1:21:40] Now, if you know this song, you'll
[1:21:45] one, two, three, a lovely day.
[1:21:49] Then the backgrounds are
[1:21:51] Lovely day, lovely day,
[1:21:56] And he just gets away with
[1:22:01] over and over and over again.
[1:22:03] And I say, get away with it because
[1:22:08] Why can't I write something
[1:22:13] And I think that it is a keyhole
[1:22:21] Magic happens when we are
[1:22:26] Just like with melody, we write a distinct
[1:22:33] With harmony, we allow for distinction,
[1:22:43] So, whatever your skill set is at this
[1:22:50] way around your instrument in a manner
[1:22:57] you're just beginning, I want you to
[1:23:04] able to express for writing the bones of
[1:23:12] that is expertly crafted and played.
[1:23:17] What we're interested in in the writing
[1:23:23] the chords that I've chosen just simply
[1:23:29] message in the lyric, and the rhythm
[1:23:35] help to express that message as well.
[1:23:39] If you're someone who tends to lay
[1:23:45] pieces without lyrics to go with
[1:23:51] because you have all these wonderful
[1:23:56] with you a character, a personality.
[1:23:59] And now it's your job to mine some of
[1:24:05] and the language that they share.
[1:24:07] So, one thing that we have trouble
[1:24:14] piece of music that we've recorded
[1:24:18] And so, an exercise for a day might
[1:24:23] less time, 10 minutes, and put that
[1:24:28] playing, uh, an idea, just on loop.
[1:24:32] And then what I'd like you to do is take
[1:24:38] just write feverishly whatever comes
[1:24:44] the musical landscape you laid down.
[1:24:46] Now, in a way, you're kind of co
[1:24:50] saying, Oh, I wrote this the other day.
[1:24:52] Isn't this kind of cool?
[1:24:53] There's something here.
[1:24:54] And now you're saying, well,
[1:24:58] And it's okay if you're not in the
[1:25:04] when you wrote that initial idea.
[1:25:06] Your job now is to say, yeah, what
[1:25:13] But I'm in a different space and that
[1:25:19] to lyrical ideas that even as they've
[1:25:25] form, you can drag ideas out from to
[1:25:45] There's a few really wonderful tools
[1:25:49] of our songs that I want to share
[1:25:53] some of the issues that we might
[1:25:58] One of those is that we can't quite get
[1:26:04] Another one of those is, man, I keep
[1:26:09] know, to really feel like, ah, we're at
[1:26:13] in, it's just kind of subtly there.
[1:26:15] And I can't quite get it to pop.
[1:26:18] Well, one of my favorite
[1:26:22] And what that means is, whatever key
[1:26:26] of G, I'm gonna wait to play the G
[1:26:31] that when that chorus comes and that
[1:26:37] Just like Bill Withers in "Lovely Day",
[1:26:43] starts on the root of the scale, For the
[1:26:47] chorus comes, it's like, ah, there it is.
[1:26:50] So if I'm in G, and that's where
[1:26:56] going to avoid it before there.
[1:26:58] So maybe my verse starts on C.
[1:27:01] So, da da da, da da
[1:27:09] Now.
[1:27:13] This is my verse.
[1:27:24] Notice that I am just using two chords.
[1:27:27] I'm, I'm using the C major and the D.
[1:27:31] But the idea here is that I've got two
[1:27:36] creates a very simple but potent sound.
[1:27:41] Now imagine for a minute if I were
[1:27:45] Now we're to do Ba da da, bum ba da
[1:27:52] bum ba da da Ba da da, bum ba da da Ba
[1:28:04] You have no idea where you
[1:28:08] can't tell you anymore either.
[1:28:10] There's too much change and so
[1:28:15] and nothing in particular.
[1:28:17] So, one of the tricks to making
[1:28:22] to save the one effectively is to let
[1:28:27] Potent.
[1:28:28] So I'm just gonna use,
[1:28:54] now.
[1:28:54] I could go.
[1:29:02] And I've come to what might be a chorus.
[1:29:05] Now, a few things happened for me there.
[1:29:09] One thing that I'm not going to blame on
[1:29:14] my melody starts after that downbeat?
[1:29:16] I played, then I sang.
[1:29:18] And in the verse, da da
[1:29:23] So what I'm sharing with you then
[1:29:30] to hear what I have to say, right?
[1:29:32] It's just gonna eventually happen.
[1:29:35] And when we do that section after
[1:29:39] allow you as the listener to disengage.
[1:29:42] So if I'm purely focused on harmony,
[1:29:47] gonna work out okay, just going C D..
[1:29:52] But let me add now a pre chorus
[1:29:56] like, well wait, I wanna pre chorus
[1:30:00] get things moving towards the chorus.
[1:30:02] I'm still gonna avoid the G,
[1:30:06] I'm gonna go somewhere else.
[1:30:08] In a key, a major key.
[1:30:11] I have diatonic chords.
[1:30:14] We call them the chords that
[1:30:17] And I think, you know, without getting
[1:30:22] got A minor, I've got B minor I could
[1:30:27] the D, and then I've got E minor.
[1:30:29] that I could go to.
[1:30:30] Now, there are all kinds of wonderful
[1:30:36] uh, D, D over F sharp, and these are
[1:30:42] to add subtlety, but I'm going to
[1:30:46] I'm just going to maybe bring in
[1:31:25] Uh, ba, ba, Ba da dap, Ba
[1:31:35] So, I went to an A minor, and
[1:31:39] maybe an E minor after that.
[1:31:40] But I'm trying to avoid that G, because
[1:31:46] is it's gonna take us home, and it's
[1:31:51] energy that I've built up through
[1:31:57] To practice this, see if you can take
[1:32:01] use, and identify the key you're in.
[1:32:04] Now, that's the chord that you're
[1:32:09] And pop it right up there
[1:32:11] And then write around it
[1:32:15] Some wonderful songs that
[1:32:18] One of my favorites to use is
[1:32:22] I grew up in a small town When the rain
[1:32:29] window I'd just stare out my window It's
[1:32:33] da da da da da da da da da da.
[1:32:36] So it really lands us securely on that
[1:32:41] what breaking away feels like, whereas
[1:32:48] Right?
[1:32:50] So,
[1:32:52] when the tonic, and in that song it's
[1:32:59] is used as a passing chord, it's okay.
[1:33:03] But, when it's used as a place
[1:33:06] to rest, then we have a dispelling
[1:33:10] So, try this technique just save the
[1:33:16] sit down for 10 minutes, write a
[1:33:20] one, and then play it down and see how
[1:33:24] And I think you'll find over time,
[1:33:29] routine with intuition rather than
[1:33:47] I want to talk about melody.
[1:33:49] Now, melody comes with great ease to
[1:33:53] comes with quite a bit of difficulty.
[1:33:56] And something that I find really
[1:34:00] well, what makes a melody great?
[1:34:03] When we ask this question,
[1:34:05] well, it's a very dynamic melody.
[1:34:07] It's gotta, it's gotta be rangy.
[1:34:09] It's gotta show off the singer's
[1:34:13] And sometimes a melody is
[1:34:17] And it has a lot of notes, a lot
[1:34:21] deliver a good amount of lyric.
[1:34:24] Sometimes a melody is just very simple
[1:34:30] shows the character of the song well.
[1:34:32] And other times it's syncopated,
[1:34:37] and unpredictable, and that shares
[1:34:43] So it seems to me the question that
[1:34:46] do you write a great melody is how
[1:34:51] song that I'm currently writing?
[1:34:53] Because that might be a very different
[1:35:00] It really comes down to what
[1:35:06] that I'm trying to get across.
[1:35:08] Just like we would ask ourselves,
[1:35:12] What is the harmonic rhythm
[1:35:17] We ask the same thing for melody.
[1:35:19] So we can define melody as two elements.
[1:35:24] It has a pitch element.
[1:35:26] So what am I singing right now?
[1:35:28] Right?
[1:35:28] Which pitches am I singing?
[1:35:30] And then what is the rhythm of
[1:35:34] Which is really how
[1:35:37] And when do I sing it in
[1:35:40] That's pretty much it.
[1:35:42] It's just pitches and rhythms
[1:35:46] When I think about melody in this way,
[1:35:52] So really what we need to know
[1:35:57] tools that I can play with?
[1:35:59] And what are the rhythmic tools
[1:36:03] something that supports the lyric?
[1:36:05] And I think, remember what we were
[1:36:10] is the body language of a song.
[1:36:13] It tells us how to interpret
[1:36:18] And so when you write melody with lyric
[1:36:24] What I think we're really saying
[1:36:30] the song have become transparent.
[1:36:33] And we are only immersed in the experience
[1:36:40] about the experience we're having.
[1:36:43] And that is where I want to
[1:36:46] With melody, we get to control
[1:36:52] And what that means is, songs have energy.
[1:36:56] There's like an amount of energy
[1:36:59] in the front of the song.
[1:37:01] And I think as writers, we can feel that
[1:37:06] into the next sections of our song.
[1:37:09] And sometimes when the section's
[1:37:13] necessarily, but not working.
[1:37:14] We feel the energy sag and we feel
[1:37:19] or the melody is just not right.
[1:37:21] Or that chord isn't pulling us forward.
[1:37:24] With melody, These tools
[1:37:30] We call it gain acceleration
[1:37:34] One of the things that we can do to create
[1:37:41] Now, I'm going to show you
[1:37:45] repetition in a verse section.
[1:37:49] This can apply to more than just
[1:37:53] melodic theme is the most basic and
[1:38:02] I'm going to use this song called
[1:38:07] If she had given us only verses
[1:38:14] little while that the energy dips.
[1:38:17] Because the song doesn't build and grow.
[1:38:20] So the question is, how do we use melody
[1:38:26] And the answer is, contrast.
[1:38:28] We give the listener a new melodic
[1:38:34] energy at that point in the song.
[1:38:37] And this song has a pre chorus
[1:38:41] Now I like this song as an example
[1:38:46] So what is responsible for creating
[1:38:53] So we just came out of a
[1:38:58] Da da da da da da da da da.
[1:39:00] Ba da da da da da da ba ba.
[1:39:05] Ba da da da da da da da.
[1:39:07] Da da da.
[1:39:09] Right?
[1:39:10] Just nice and chill.
[1:39:11] So if the prechorus does this I, I'd
[1:39:22] At least you're all mine.
[1:39:28] That's a really different melodic theme.
[1:39:32] Now, I think as writers, we think,
[1:39:38] Right?
[1:39:38] And a really wonderful way to come up
[1:39:44] we're looking for is a new melodic
[1:39:49] one, it repeats that melodic theme a
[1:39:57] And so what I want to show you is how to
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